少点错误 03月06日
The old memories tree
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本文以独特的视角,描绘了一个处理旧物的故事。主人公在收拾行囊时,面对承载着回忆的物品,最终选择将它们挂在郊外的一棵“记忆之树”上。这棵树上挂满了各式各样的物品,从旧照片、玩具到更沉重的故事,如婴儿服和葬礼骨灰盒。通过将这些物品放置在树上,主人公似乎也在释放过去的记忆,并与过去和解。故事也暗示了时间流逝,以及人们如何处理和面对各自的记忆。

🧸主人公在收拾行囊时,发现了Fooby、旧照片、生日卡、钥匙链等旧物,这些物品承载着不同的回忆,但都面临着被丢弃的命运。

🌳主人公没有选择丢弃,而是将它们带到郊外的一棵“记忆之树”。这棵树上挂满了各式各样的物品,代表着不同人的记忆和故事,成为了一个独特的记忆存储空间。

💔在树的深处,主人公看到了婴儿服、被涂抹掉成员的家庭照、甚至葬礼骨灰盒,这些物品揭示了隐藏在美好回忆背后的悲伤和痛苦,暗示了记忆的复杂性。

🪜在树的中心,主人公发现了一位抱着玩偶的哭泣女孩。主人公将Fooby放在女孩的玩偶旁,似乎象征着一种情感的传递和慰藉,帮助女孩释放内心的痛苦。

Published on March 5, 2025 7:03 PM GMT

This has nothing to do with usual Less Wrong interests, just my attempt to practice a certain style of creative writing I've never really tried before.

You're packing again. By now you have a drill. Useful? In a box. Clutter? In a garbage bag.

But there's some things that don't feel right in either. Under your bed, you find your old soft toy Fooby, now tattered, smelly, and stained. In your bedside table, there's a photo of you and your ex in Paris. Behind the dresser, an 18th birthday card from your nan. In the kitchen drawer, a key-ring your best friend bought for you when you were twelve.

You stare at them for a few minutes, then sigh and prepare to toss them in the garbage bag. Then you change your mind, dump them in a backpack with a coil of string, and head out on your bike.

You go down the road, around a corner, through an alleyway and along a dirt track for a couple of minutes. Ahead, you finally see the tree, a huge old thing spreading its canopy wide in an otherwise empty field.

Spring is newly come, and the fresh growth is mostly bare of memories. You quickly hang up the photo, keyring, and birthday card, but you feel that action isn't significant enough for Fooby.

Ducking, you enter the canopy and walk inwards. Past the fresh growth are last year's memories. Mostly photos, knickknacks, and old toys, but sometimes the artifacts speak of sadder stories...

A branch burdened with baby clothes, all still in their original packaging. A family photo with one member carefully blotted out. Even a funeral urn.

As you step further in, the toys start to be made of wood instead of plastic, and the clothes have rotted away.

At last, you reach the centre. Someone's hammered metal handholds into the trunk, and gingerly you start to climb, rising back out of the past towards the present. Here the artifacts get stranger. Broken musical instruments. A car key. An empty bottle of wine. A wedding ring.

About halfway up, you spy a 12-year-old girl sitting on a wide bough, cuddling a smelly rag-doll, her eyes red and wet. You scramble up beside her. Silently, you take the rag-doll and nestle it in a fork. Finally, you place Fooby in its lap.

You give the girl's hand a squeeze, and together you descend.



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